Web Page
Critique
Directions: Write a one-page critique for
the web page shown below. Discuss the contrast,
repetition, alignment and proximity you see in the
design.

There are four primary elements to consider in
educational design:
Contrast, Repetition,
Alignment and Proximity.
Contrast is the first element and can be a
very effective way of increasing interest in a Web page.
For contrast to be effective, two elements must be very
different. I am graphically and artistically challenged,
so when I first saw the model above, it was obviously in
color and the "Mendo Oceanography Institute" title bar
gave me cause for concern as the text was blue and the
background was also a shade of blue. To check for the
proper contrast, I printed out the image in grayscale.
Surprisingly (to me) the contrast was effective as the
text is very easily read. Additionally, putting the title
in a box and changing its font made the screen not only
interesting, it was effective in organizing the
information in my opinion.
Repetition is the next element and it very
useful in tying concepts or pages together for the
reader. In order for repetition to have the desired
effect, it must be consistent. When you look at the font
type for the body text, the bullet symbols and colors (on
the web page, as this grayscale image does not show the
colors) you can see that the elements of this particular
web page were repeated throughout the page. This is not
an eclectic design and therefore meets the requirements
of being repetitious.
When alignment (the third element) is
considered, you should remember that arbitrary placement
of objects is not a good practice in visual design. I was
concerned at first when I considered the alignment
because the title appeared centered and the body text was
left aligned. However, every element on the screen on
this web page has a visual connection with the other
elements and presents the screen as unified and
organized. This work is professional looking and has a
simple sophistication that appears to me to avoid using
more than one alignment on the screen because of the
length of the body text bullets and the successful
contrast offered between the title block and the text.
This page would not have been as effective had the body
text been centered.
Proper use of proximity kept the clutter off
the screen. It was not "too busy" and that made the
information appear organized. This home page appears to
be a table of contents to the rest of the web site and
has links (I assume) to all the other information
available to the reader. Because it is clean, neat and
fast, it enables to readily reach the other pages on the
site.
Overall, the page had a clean, practical look, with
"white space" between the elements that were placed
together as a visual "unit". It appears to me to meet the
criteria for effective visual design.